Monday, February 25, 2008

My Journey

LIFE AS IS.....seems so long,
with the childlike innocence gone.
The happiness to have gotten to ride a bicycle,
To the sad days when half a rupee was lost;
But now it doesn't matter, coz the rays of the world has touched me;
And I can only see whats good for others, is for me.
The BIG BUCK is weighing on my shoulders,
And I take the path where its shadow falls.
For out here I cant see now, what was precious to me before;
coz my soul has lost its eye

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I have written this poem keeping in mind the changes in one life which somebody can identify with; from where innocence leads to happiness from small occurances in our life to the path we take and the change of perceptions towards achieving more materialistic needs

please do comment on what you feel

Thoughts Over Chai said...

Really nice...well i never thought that you could write so well...and more importantly u take life so seriously ;)

Nobody said...

Totally identify with this one. Nice.....probably the only difference (and the irony) is that my soul hasnt lost its eye or sight...it just turns a blind eye....