Monday, February 25, 2008

So little I can do

There is so little I can do, but love you;
There is so little I can do, but pray for you;
Your prescence supports me,
Your abscence hurts me;
Your feeling soothes me,
You touch misses me;
You've made a space in me I cant empty;
There is so little I can do but pray for you.

5 comments:

Thoughts Over Chai said...
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Thoughts Over Chai said...

I didnt understood by what does "your touch misses me" means..keeping that aside the other lines are well written.

Dreams,Visions and Me (Hozefa Ayyajiwala) said...

its a conjugation written to mean ...that i miss your touch

Nobody said...

And that in itself says it all.....one wouldn't feel the need to ask for anything if you are able to do just this bit, 'so little i can do'......

Nobody said...

Why did you stop when i was just beginning to relish it?
Why did you stop when you started it all?
Why did you stop when so much is unsaid?

Ok i was trying my hand at it but you do it best so why this laambi khamoshi?